第一單元的寫作技巧


Exercise 10: Joining sentences

Remove the repeated words in each pair of sentences. Add words to join the sentences together.
刪除每個句子重複的字.對句子添加字.

Example: The grey squirrel is a common animal. The grey squirrel is seen as a pest.
灰松鼠是常見動物.灰松鼠被視為害蟲.
Update: The grey squirrel is a common animal and is seen as a pest.

1. The Mongolian wild horse nearly became extinct. The Mongolian wild horse is now an endangered species.
蒙古野馬幾乎滅絕.蒙古野馬是瀕危物種.
Update: The Mongolian wild horse nearly became extinct and is now an endangered species.
蒙古野馬幾乎滅絕,是瀕危物種.

2. The grizzly bear is an endangered species in some areas. The polar bear is an endangered species in some areas.
灰熊在一些區域是瀕危物種.北極熊在一些區域是瀕危物種.
Update: Both the grizzly bear and the polar bear are endangered species in some areas.
灰熊和北極熊是瀕危物種在一些區域.

3. The Mongolian wild horse has a bigger body than a domestic horse. The Mongolian wild horse has shorter legs than a domestic horse.
蒙古野馬比起國內馬有巨大的身體.蒙古野馬比起國內馬有較短的腳.
Update: The Mongolian wild horse has a bigger body and shorter legs than a domestic horse.
蒙古野馬比起國內馬有巨大的身體和短的腳

4. In Canada, grizzly bears live mainly in the forests. In Canada, polar bears live mainly on the ice.
在加拿大,灰熊主要生活在森林裡.在加拿大,北極熊主要生活在冰上.
Update: In Canada, grizzly bears live mainly in the forests whereas polar bears live mainly on the ice.
在加拿大,灰熊主要生活在森林裡,而北極熊主要生活在冰上.

5. The Arabian oryx is not safe from hunters. The snow leopard is not safe from hunters.
獵人對於阿拉伯羚羊不安全.獵人對於雪豹不安全.
Update: Neither the Arabian oryx nor the snow leopard are safe from hunters.
獵人對於阿拉伯羚羊和雪豹不安全.

6. The American black bear is not large. The American black bear is not aggressive.
美國黑熊不多.美國黑熊沒侵略性.
Update: The American black bear is not large or aggressive.
美國黑熊沒數量或侵略性.